Lamentful Christmas

Hello. I have composed another new piece, this piece's instruments are flute, oboe, clarinets, alto saxophone, bells, piano, and 4 violins. The volume of this piece is terrible, that's because it's my first time using Garritan Personal Orchestra's sample, so please bare with it. x_x So please just listen for the general idea and the atmosphere and etc... This piece is suppose to portrait a sad and lamentful Christmas eve (as the title states ^^'). So please give me some critcisms and/or advice, thanks.

*It won't let me upload for some reason x_x*

So if you really want to listen, you can go to this URL (this is the other forum that i uploaded my piece at): http://forums.ichigos.com/attachment.php?a...27&d=1136057793

Wow, very nice.

You establish such a nice atmosphere in this piece! I really enjoyed listening. One little suggestion, however...you do seem to repeat the same progression about 800 times in the piece (major 7th, minor 7th, 6th, etc.) That is a very nice progression, but perhaps it needs a bit more to contrast it. The piece was very short. It's not like you don't have room!

Cheers,

Evan

Strange: I click on that link and nothing shows up.

I had to save the file (right-click and hit "save target as") and play it in media player. Good luck.

Well, you can also look for it at www.geocities.com/composer_36 (my website) if it still doesn't work. =P