Ok, I took a look and it wasn't a bad start.
I want you to try it again but this time I want you to think about a few things. Don't feel pressured to have the assignemets done quickly. You can take up to a week. I want you to try and get the best out of the assignments for yourself.
Let's take a look at the second exercise that you did. First off, the 4 16th note idea was not really a hybrid idea. It is more of an extension or continuation of the idea of the 1ts motif. I also saw that you combined the ideas of motif 2 and 3 a number of times. And other times you are using continuations of the idea of just one motif.
So here is what I want for you to do:
1) Take a look at the various motifs analyzing what rhythms and melodic shapes make up the different motifs.
2) Next, think about what aspects would you like to "cut" away from any two motifs and "paste" together to form another idea that "seems new".
3) This time When you have created your "hybrid" I want you to label what parts came from what motif.
Remember, its ok to take your time with this.
Let me know if you need further explanation.
