
Caffeinated Composer
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That's a nice start, full of ideas which we can build from.
There are some problems with it though, so I'm going to suggest how to work with this material, and build from it our minuet.
First of all, I'm going to want you to condense this. It stands at 16 bars, and I would like it to be 8 bars. Sorry about this, but I feel that the condensing will allow you to have much more of a sense of purpose and direction in the music.
There are also some places where the harmony sticks out a bit, against the melody, but seeing as I only asked you to apply very general "chord per measure" style harmony, I can't really comment on this.
When reworking what you have here, I would like you to think not just in terms of "1 chord per measure", because while that may be an ok approach for broadly sketching it out, it is not sufficient for the finished thing... so harmonies should change within a bar, whenever they need to.
For example, look at that Bach minuet we started with - the harmony changes already within the first measure.
In a minuet, you might expect the harmony to change more in a bar, when dealing with a cadence - watch for examples of this, and try to emulate this in your own. ( a place where you could/should change the harmony in the bar is the last beat of measure 2)
The modulation, out of necessity, will be much shorter in your reworked version, and it does not have to be long, in a minuet. It does not have to be a strong modulation, because as soon as we reach V, we often repeat straight back into I territory, in a minuet's opening.
The last comment I'm going to make is about the form of your melody. Consider it carefully, so that the melody flows, and doesn't seem to end up on a note unnaturally. An example of where this happens is going from bars 2 to 3. The E from bar 2 wants to resolve to the F, and yet it is thwarted, by having to go to G. It further feels unnatural, because it is moving by leap.
I find it hard to put into words how one "feels" out a melody. An important part of it, though, is knowing when to have shorter note values on the strong beats of the bar. (your semiquavers and quavers for example).
To me, this is a matter of taste, and also one which the rules of counterpoint help with, but your sense of melody should develop with time.
I think, speaking very, very generally, it is better to have the faster note values on the last beat (or last 2 beats) of the bars, in 3/4. This "rule" can be contradicted to make contrasts.. but don't follow it strictly anyway.
Summary: You have a nice start to a minuet here. You have actually provided me with too much material (!) and so I would like you to condense it, to 8 bars (or thereabouts).
Watch for harmonic progression, and the shape of the melody, ensuring that they both are logical, and "flow" well.
I will provide my own suggestions to these 2 aspects, when I see your condensed version.
You have some interesting rhythmic, and melodic ideas, so I will be looking forward to seeing what can be done with them.
Remember, take your time! I would rather wait 2 weeks, and get a well turned out melody, than have something rushed in by tomorrow.
In fact, I don't want to see anything for at least half a week! So you must carefully plan out your harmonic structure, and have ample time to work with the melody et cetera.
P.s. Sorry for rambling!
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