
Intermediate Composer
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Hi Máté,
As usual I've been really slow in getting back to you! Thanks for doing the homework, which was tough. There are actually quite a few things I'd like to say about this if you don't mind.
Firstly, well done on your voice leading, it's excellent, I haven't spotted any consecutives yet.
Secondly, there are a few things I think I must have missed, that we need to sort out quickly:
I thought it was a shame that you didn't use the formula I - vii6/3 - I6/3 as this is particularly good to practice. I've put a couple of examples up here (i and ii) to give you a hand with that, and to show you how to approach the chords (which you asked my advice on and I never got back to you...), in both minor and major moving up and down. These progressions should sound quite familiar to you as they are very common (and good)!
I think it's a good idea to stick my advice about using chords a 3rd, 6th, 5th or 4th apart. There are too many progressions that move from roots that are only one step apart, which sounds very weak. The only exception (for now anyway) is I - vii6/3 (or the same backwards) (and ii6/3 - i in minor keys); try to stick to progressions with a note in common otherwise. I wouldn't use vii6/3 to VI as much as you do, especially in the major, I'm not sure it works very well. ii6/3 - VI in the minor does sound quite nice however, because the tritone is still able to resolve properly. We'll look at this sort of thing more at some point, a lot of it has more to do with voice-leading resolution than anything else.
Most important of all, don't forget that vii is always diminished!!!!!! For example the progression you have written in F-sharp minor starts I - 'VII6/3' (an F sharp minor triad moving to an E major triad in first inversion), and as a result doesn't really sound like F sharp minor at all, it sounds like A major. If instead of E, you had used E sharp, this problem would be resolved - This is really important -.
To help you I've also come up with a rule about how and when to use v (minor).
Basically you must always try to stick to using V, and all the other chords formed by the harmonic minor, (ii (diminished), iv, V, VI). The only situation where you can safely use v, or a minor dominant is when it is used to connect the tonic note to the submediant. In my example iii) we have a classic situation where this happens in the bass part, in G minor. We start with a G minor tonic chord, and the bass line descends by one whole tone to F natural, above which chord v6/3 (i.e. minor) can be used. After this the bass line 'wants' to keep moving downwards, so in my example I've put in I - v6/3 - iv6/3, which takes us to an e-flat in the bass.
So here you can see that the melodic minor scale (descending) has been used in the bass, which has meant we've used B-flats, and chord v. However as the continues to move down to the dominant note, we have to use V (major) above it. This is because the third of the chord no longer wants to go downwards, here we need it to rise up to the tonic, and we use the leading note, B natural, from the harmonic minor. This leading note relationship is pretty much the most defining aspect of tonal music, and underpins the tonic-dominant relationship that all tonal music is about.
When you don't use the leading note like this a passage will sound begin to lose its sense of key, and you might be beginning to suggest a move to another, which is something that obviously needs to be followed up. For example, if we were to have a progression in G minor, beginning on chord i, and then moved to a chord of f major in first inversion ('VII6/3'), the sense of G minor is immediately obscured, and it's quite confusing when nothing happens as a result of this. Change the f natural to f-sharp here however, ('vii(dim)6/3') and the sense of G minor is restored. I hope this isn't too complicated, please don't worry you're doing great, and we'll go over these things many times.
I've also included an example progression to give you some idea of how to put all these things that I've mentioned together. (Ex iv)
Can I ask one thing also? From now on, please write key signatures at the start of each progression, it'll make it easier to see where accidetals etc come from, and when you have used V correctly.
Perhaps you could do another two progressions for homework? One major and one minor, showing some of these things, and remembering to avoid the weaker progressions (roots moving by step - except of course vii6/3 - I and ii6/3 - i in the minor), and keeping chord vii as diminished always. Perhaps with these you should end on a 'closing' cadence, either plagal or perfect, and use one of the other cadences in the middle (imperfect or interrupted), you will probably hear that this will give your works a more rounded and finished feel.
Matt
PS Let me know if you have any trouble opening the finale file, I think I have a newer version than you.
I've also had to delete some of the old PDFs, I'm running out of space! If didn't get the chance to download them, I can email them to you.
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