a little pianopiece

i hope you enjoy it
are there any thinks i could change to make the song better?
greetings from germany

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Hi, Hubert. Welcome to the forums. My only comment with this piece is regarding the difficulty, or potential difficulty. There are a lot of passages that I don't think the majority of pianists would be able to play (rapid scale-like passages, and what sounded like harmonic accompaniment in 3rds. At that speed? That'll be rather painful).

It sounds very nice. Hope this helps!

sorry, have i understand you - you think many pianists wouldn't be able to plaay this?
so - what do you think, who played and recorded this? god?

Edit: oh yeah i see your point, i had the check "majority" in my word-translation-book. so, i don't know whether the mijority could play this, but i'm also not sure whether the mijority could play beethoven, rachmaninof or chopin^^

Oh, Meister. You're hilarious.

Anywho.

I've already told you that I sincerely adore this piece. I would love it even more if I could see it written as a score!

really, really fresh and interesting. would love to hear more from you.

2 Matthew: I agree this isn't the easiest piece ever, but why take that into consideration when composing - who cares how many pianists would be able to play the piece? i think those complex passages are fine there, ok with the rest of the music. they don't look like something forced by the author.

very interesting!

an other song is in progress but it will be more esthetic. so i need a feew weeks...

Hey Hubert,

It's a nice piece indeed. Although i did find it a bit to sequencial, a bit to little "telling something" for my taste. It's hard to play i'd recon but it obviously isn't impossible. Maybe you could add a part with a more obvious melody, so this could be the middle/development section. It misses a real caracter, but then again that's something i prefer in music. You have great composing abilities though, that's obvious.