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Old Nov 12 2007, 6:28 PM

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Arrow Little Piece in G Minor [MUST HEAR] !!!!!!!!

hey, this is my new very simple piece, i hope you would like it, please PLEASE leave comments, even if you are not professionals (NO OFFENCE) PLEAAAZEEEE!!
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Old Nov 12 2007, 6:30 PM

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THE FILE loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool !
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Old Nov 12 2007, 8:08 PM

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Hmmmm, "Must hear"?? Well I am definately not a professional, but I will try to comment. First of all, are you sure this piece is in G minor?? Seemed more like B flat major to me. And it seemed like the midi file had the sustain pedal on all the way through . It did seem like you have a good understanding of traditional "classical" style though. But if you want to develop the piece I think you could expand upon it if you put more time into it.
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Old Nov 12 2007, 9:31 PM

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It's not G Minor. It's Bb major. I would also add some trills to the melody perhaps. It's also very short. I would repeat the whole thing again, or some portion of the song I like the piece. The chord choices are pleasant to the ear.
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Old Nov 16 2007, 1:05 PM

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why is this 'MUST HEAR!'?

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Old Nov 16 2007, 3:06 PM

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it seems like you dont know that Bb Major = G minor !!

the are both having B and E as FLAT !!! By the way its not the matter of the Key Signature because G Minor is Bb Major, and its a fact that when creating Little Pieces, how you can consider the Idea of the THEME and its effect on the listener, and its not "Must HEAR" i am sorry because its not me who uploaded the file!!
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Old Nov 16 2007, 3:24 PM

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it seems like you dont know that Bb Major = G minor !!

the are both having B and E as FLAT !!! By the way its not the matter of the Key Signature because G Minor is Bb Major, and its a fact that when creating Little Pieces, how you can consider the Idea of the THEME and its effect on the listener, and its not "Must HEAR" i am sorry because its not me who uploaded the file!!
Ha ha ha, are you kidding me?

Get some music theory knowledge and quickly because your post was about as inaccurate as you can get.
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Old Nov 16 2007, 4:04 PM

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it seems like you dont know that Bb Major = G minor !!

the are both having B and E as FLAT !!! By the way its not the matter of the Key Signature because G Minor is Bb Major, and its a fact that when creating Little Pieces, how you can consider the Idea of the THEME and its effect on the listener, and its not "Must HEAR" i am sorry because its not me who uploaded the file!!
Alright, let me help you out a little. True, Bb Major and G minor have the same key signature...but they are NOT the same key. In fact there are SEVEN different keys all with the same Bb Eb key sig (and four more that are relative to it). It all has to do with chord you are centering around and resolving to throughout the piece.

Here is your piece transposed into G minor. The second one it D Dorian just for fun (based off the 3rd in the scale, but still with the same key sig). try to catch the suttle differences between them, It may be tough as they're both based off a minor chord, but they are there.
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Old Nov 16 2007, 4:08 PM

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k, I just realized that that was D Phrygian, not D Dorian (Dorian is based of the 2nd of the scale). Sorry about that. Oh, and the D PHRYGIAN modulation sounds really cool
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Old Nov 16 2007, 10:30 PM

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Certianaly an enjoyable little piece, but also certiantly not in g minor (yes, it does matter whether you call it G minor or Eb major!), and I don't know if this is quite a "must hear" piece either. Expand upon it some more, add in some development, and then try reposting it for us to hear, because it really has potential.
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