little poliphonic pastorale

a simple piece in a renaissance-like style.

a simple piece in a renaissance-like style.

I am sad to say but your piece wanders a bit too much. A lot of renaissance does go somewhere and uses less dissonance. To me, it sounds like an awkward turtle. I would suggest making the piece a little but more coherent.

I think you are writing more complicated pieces than you can write. Start off a bit more simple and then build onto it.

Also a lot pieces during this time period end in something called a Picardy Third.

please dont feel sad about me! thank you for your kind comment!