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Old Nov 13 2007, 9:14 AM

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Smile little waltz
hello Fellows, I have written one small waltz , want to share with you, I wait that like they , I call it "a sigh by his ears "
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Old Nov 13 2007, 12:48 PM

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Nice, simple and perfect! These are the adjectives that could better describe this beautiful little piece of music.

The only drawback could be its harmonic/melodic predictability, but, IMO, I wasn't for a moment bored. Maybe because of the piece's brevity. The variations in dynamics helped a lot...

And, oh, such a beautiful score...a treat, really!

Thumbs up, from me! Keep writing...I want more!
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Old Nov 13 2007, 5:27 PM

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I have to say I liked it, nice and jolly! The only thing I'm not to mad about is the ending that was attached, it feels like the piece is finished, and then you try to at a little more...
But that's me, it doesn't detract from your piece at all. Very good!
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Old Nov 17 2007, 2:26 AM

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very enjoyable!
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Old Nov 17 2007, 7:18 PM

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pretty nice. I also thought the ending was a bit extend though.
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Old Nov 17 2007, 9:57 PM

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Love it! Especially like the trill at the ending! Nice touch, and lots of variation in the tune.
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Old Nov 20 2007, 12:30 AM

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nice..I agree that it should end after the trill...very neat, simple, good!
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Old Nov 23 2007, 11:02 PM

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It's a pretty little piece.
A perfect miniature.
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Old Nov 25 2007, 9:18 PM

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Perfect piece. The ending gives it a nice little touch, i like it! Don't remove the ending whatever you do! This is a job well done!
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Old Dec 5 2007, 3:23 PM
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Great little waltz! Very lovely, very melodious and joyfull! I love it!
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