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Old Aug 18 2006, 1:35 AM

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This a piece I started writing on piano, then decided to expand to include soprano sax and flute. Originally, I was only going to have one or the other of the woodwinds, but I thought that they might compliment each other nicely...and I think I managed to do that fairly well (at least I hope so!). The title comes from the feeling I get of the piece always moving forward almost like a machine, but with a much softer grace and elegance--almost like floating, but with a constant feeling of foward momentum (no matter how subtle or strong). I've also had some ideas to expand this piece, making this the fourth movement in a four-movement quartet (adding percussion to the mix), where each movement represents one of the four elements (in the order of water, fire, earth, and air [air being this piece]).

What's really interesting is that this piece originally started out as being quarter note=192, but in this performance, the performers never really got it up to speed (oh, the headaches of trying to organize a senior composition recital!), and I must say that I'm pleasantly surprised at preferring the piece at this slower tempo. Meter was still an issue...the 5/8 bars still feel more like 3/4 bars in this performance, but alas--it's still a decent recording, and was still the audience's favorite at my senior recital. Enjoy:

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Old Aug 19 2006, 12:02 PM

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I liked this work so much ! The harmonies and melodies were exellent. It reminded me of Pat Metheny, his "A map of the world" album. are you familiar with his work ? If not, you should have a listen, because after listening to this work, Im sure that you will enjoy it.

I didnt particularly like the same patern that you used in the piano. It gets a bit too much after some time. It sounds a bit like rock piano. But if thats the effect you are after, than its fine. But still, you could have done a bit more variation on piano.

Exelent work.

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Old Aug 24 2006, 6:57 PM

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Pianoman, hey yet again!

okay, I'm reviewing yet another of your pieces...you're apparently my composer of the hour, haha.

This is hands down my favorite of yours that I have heard. It still incorporates that flowing style you grasp very well, but has much more dimension and variation. I also thought it was very clean, which was nice. Not that all music has to be clean, I just liked it in this case.

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The title comes from the feeling I get of the piece always moving forward almost like a machine, but with a much softer grace and elegance--almost like floating, but with a constant feeling of foward momentum (no matter how subtle or strong).
Yes, that came across very well.

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I've also had some ideas to expand this piece, making this the fourth movement in a four-movement quartet (adding percussion to the mix), where each movement represents one of the four elements (in the order of water, fire, earth, and air [air being this piece]).
You should run with this idea, it could work really well and add even more dimension to the piece. I would have guessed that this one would be air!
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Old Aug 24 2006, 9:57 PM

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Beautiful! I am reminded of the music of Oregon in the Paul McCandless (sp?) years, or perhaps the Paul Winter Consort. I love the folk/jazz parallelisms in the changes - with many major 7th chords. I can see how it could be served by a faster tempo but your instrumentalists did a fine job of interpreting it. I was particularly pleased to note that the where the flute kind of disappeared in the Finale rendering, it was crystal clear in the live recording, a testament to your intuition and orchestrational skills.

Congratulations - I know how nice it is to have a live recording of one's work - You should be very proud of this peice.
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