Meditation on Love

Originally Posted by frantz

NOW i agree i am working hard on this but i think that it's not just a matter of study, but of insight. anyway thank you!!!!

Yeah, seriously some of the harmonic motion sounds really clunky. Like you try to cadence and it just...doesn't work. Of course you don't HAVE to cadence if you want some sort of desired effect, but this sounds like a lack of understanding of Harmony. So yeah.

Frantz

I think what the others are saying comes from the lag of the violin. Everything fits, it is just the attack on the strings that is off. This makes the entire piece seem just a little off. With a DAW you would be able to shift that attack and make everything line up better, if that is your intent. The piece works fine as is.

I hope that makes sense.

Ron