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Old Jun 1 2007, 10:22 PM

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Hey,

I like it! Its progressing nicely. Very classical. Which is why I think it would sound nice when after the initial flute solo the cellos played stacatto'ed semi quavers rather than held notes. It would give the piece more energy. But that's just individual preference. So far its good. Lots of themes introduced in the beginning though - but if they were 'extracted' (such a terrible way to describe music) later with sufficient attention and variation paid to each of them, I think it would be a magnificent piece. More piano though - certainly this piece could be a piano concerto. Or a piano con flute concerto! That is all *sits patiently waiting for next installment* - check out my latest midi post i think you might want to vary this into something pretty All the best,

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Old Jun 1 2007, 10:58 PM

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Here's the newly edited file. What do you think?

Melody 27
very very charming perfect classical style, so enjoyable! my compliments!
may i ask you which sound fonts you have used? lovely sonorities!
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Old Jun 1 2007, 11:16 PM
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Thank you. Sound fonts? Oh, that would be the GPO orchestra and a Bosendorfer piano.
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Old Jun 2 2007, 12:51 AM

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Thank you. Sound fonts? Oh, that would be the GPO orchestra and a Bosendorfer piano.
thanks for the information. beautiful sounds!
and which software do you use for composing?
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Old Jun 3 2007, 1:08 AM

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oh, interesting. thanks!
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Old Jun 6 2007, 10:28 PM

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nice job the piano writing toward the very end before the five-thousand measure long cadence is very, very nice. Keep writing!! I love listening to your compositions!
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Old Jun 6 2007, 10:59 PM
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Old Jul 7 2007, 8:10 PM
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Working on a new version of this arrangement.. I like this melody a lot.

Flute Melody 27
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Old Jul 8 2007, 1:37 AM

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Working on a new version of this arrangement.. I like this melody a lot.
Flute Melody 27[/url]
Wolfgang would be jealous. Everything I've listened to of yours is easily recognizable as following in his path. You have chosen a great example to follow.
I look forward to hearing an original long piece by you.
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