Hey,
I like it! Its progressing nicely. Very classical. Which is why I think it would sound nice when after the initial flute solo the cellos played stacatto'ed semi quavers rather than held notes. It would give the piece more energy. But that's just individual preference. So far its good. Lots of themes introduced in the beginning though - but if they were 'extracted' (such a terrible way to describe music) later with sufficient attention and variation paid to each of them, I think it would be a magnificent piece. More piano though - certainly this piece could be a piano concerto. Or a piano con flute concerto! That is all *sits patiently waiting for next installment* - check out my latest midi post i think you might want to vary this into something pretty  All the best,
Regards
Pravin
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