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Old Jun 1 2007, 2:33 AM

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Minor tree

Here is my new(est?) song. Some critique would be nice.

http://koti.mbnet.fi/sakvaka/molli3_VSC3.mp3
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Old Jun 1 2007, 10:53 PM

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It's short, but it's great.
The concept of using only minor chord isn't very new, but you did a great job. The percussions seem a bit "looped" lol! Maybe add some variety for the drum and add some developpement?
But it's fine like this too.
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Old Jun 2 2007, 1:43 PM

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it is a nice song. i think the song would be just great if you add some big walking bass there, just my 2 cents

Esteban
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Old Jun 8 2007, 10:15 AM

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The percussions seem a bit "looped" lol! Maybe add some variety for the drum and add some developpement?
But it's fine like this too.
Congrats'
Yes.. Originally it was made for chorus, but then I entered chords and melody to Band-In-A-Box. So the drums and bass are fully computer-generated.

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The concept of using only minor chord isn't very new
Hmm. I wonder what that means. Not all the chord where minors. yes, the piece started with minor scale, but soon modulated to major scale.
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