This is very cool film music. You are a very imaginative person and maybe this story will get filmed, and your music will be used in the film.
I've listenend to the first piece. Liked the interplay of the different instruments near the end very much. A suggestion, can you make it fade out instead of ending it just like that?
Now for the second piece. This piece, IMO, fits the text very well. I think I can feel a little "terrible and empty inside". I thought there would be a strange theme in the music since there were cryptographic algorithms, but looks like I guessed wrongly

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