More Music to make your ears bleed

Sup yo.

Here's my current project. Don't mind my singing, I'm on crack.

SoundClick artist: DOFTS - page with MP3 music downloads

hey dude despite your stupid comments about I pretending to look cool on my playing beethoven your song starts so freaking cool, that yelling at the begining (reminds me black sabbath) is really unexpected so expresive. But after a while becomes kinda boring and noisy, u should start by improving the sound. Turn up the voice and hide the echo. And after that maybe some chords change without changing that nice mood it feels at the begining, but keep those long lasting yelling, I really like them.

Yea not going happen for multiple reasons. Number 1, not gunna rerecord. Number 2, those yells hurt. Number three, moods should change. Number 4, because I spelt number 3 with the word three.

It's pretty good but the yells do get annoying after a while.

Also you're not funny, sorry.

Hrm. This sounds like one of those random emo subgenres. Rerecord it so it sounds like death metal.

Haha... "this account is currently under review" I wonder why?

This does remind me of alot of emo subgenres, it also reminds me of when Daron Malakian "sings"

Now i got it. u gotta change chords right after 0:33. that's when it starts getting anoying, everything b4 is just beautyful. Keep the randomness, maybe make it softer than sht and then go back to the yelling part.