MOTIF CHALLENGE - MARCE DE JOK

Originally Posted by JonSlaughter

I think that motive sucks!! (j/k... just hard to use)

But I tried to write a few ideas on it(short of course). It gave me a headache so I quit. The ideas are just that and completely formless but the first is sorta based on the ground-bass and the second is more canonic like.

mp3's are at

12-13-2007-Motive idea 1.mp3

and

12-13-2007-Motive idea 2.mp3

Hopefully they don't suck to much ;/

i say these are awesome!

like the first one more ;P

The first one starts out ok but there are a few quirks that bother me. The second gets a little messy but I like the sequencing(everything pretty much is derived from the motive too). I guess for 45 min of work they are not to bad but obviously can be improved.