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Old Jan 8 2008, 9:12 AM

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Movement four, second sonata: Rondo Allegro

Hi!

I finished the fourth movement of my second piano sonata in D flat Major: Rondo Allegro.

You can hear the music here:

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love to hear comments, like always. They help me a lot in getting more objective.

best wishes and happy new year!

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Old Jan 9 2008, 2:12 AM
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Wow! I'm surprised that someone else has not commented on this already.

I really like the piece a lot, so I do not have much constructive criticism. However, I hope that stating what I liked about this piece helps.

The movement struck me as very classical.

The fourth movement is simple beautiful. I loved how the high frequency of the notes (16th notes) gave me the sensation of soaring on first impression. The left and right hand melodies chase other, but in a good way. Also, the frequent modulation was a plus, it kept the music very interesting while not breaking the melody.

I also liked how the piece transitioned to minor in the middle before transitioning back to major near the end restating the theme in a more bold, and victorious way.
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Old Jan 9 2008, 6:13 AM

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Thanks so much for your comments, Kia. This movement is more classical than the first three movements, I realize this. Especially because the first movement is very heavy in nature, I wanted this sonata finish in a lighter way, something, I hope, I accomplished.

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Old Jan 9 2008, 9:24 AM

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Hello!

The score of my second piano sonata can now be downloaded at :

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Best wishes,
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