Music for an ad

So this was a little piano piece I wrote for my university's tv station advertising cusnacks- a handful of students who deliver munchies to anyone who needs them. The commercial was basically a guy going through many obstacles (attacked by dog, hit by car, shot at) in order to deliver some twizzlers. The chaos right before the last quarter note is him knocking on the door and the people never answering.

I think it's quite a silly piece, but it worked very well with the video. Let me know what you think of it musically! I wrote it when I had only taken 1 proper music class, it's for 2 pianos.

Cheers,
-Bolanos

Not bad. As a piano piece, this comes across somewhat monochromatically (in the color sense of the word). You clearly have a number of 'events' happening, and the piano has a tough time imparting this. I do think this might work much better if it were orchestrated for a larger ensemble. FWIW

Interesting, I've never considered that. You think variety of timbre would help differentiate the events?

What's FWIW?

FWIW= For What It's Worth. That's a good song too.

Interesting, I've never considered that. You think variety of timbre would help differentiate the events?

Yep.