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Old Jan 8 2008, 6:54 PM

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Smile Music I've made

Hi!

yeah, I thought this'd be an awesome place to ask for feedback. I'm kinda new to music altogether and have made a couple of tracks. I'd really like to improve (a lot :P) so some comments and suggestions would be great.

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Contains three files:
Bread.mp3: Uhh, something with saxophones and brass. :P (yeah I don't even know what kinda music I'm making o__O) Kinda relaxing I think but it just sounds weird sometimes. Can't put my finger on what's wrong tho.

Musacbaxx.mp3: Mysterious and a bit short and it wasn't supposed to be in the zip but it was anyways. >:(

No_.mp3: Very random. Listen and you will se. :0

Also I hope I posted this in the right forum, it does say "electronic" but Avant Garde I don't even know what it is. :/
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Old Jan 8 2008, 8:28 PM
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Hi,

Bread: somehow I don't like it very much, sounds a lot like my headache lol sorry no offense

Musacbaxx: I LOVE IT! I really do! It has a great and a mysterious feeling to it, it really should be made longer because I love that kind of stuff. Feels cold but with intense bursts of warmness. Very cool!

No_: a little too random for me but ok
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Old Jan 13 2008, 7:45 PM

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Bread: For someone who is new to music you are making me envious ): I wish I could write brass like this. My only complaint is that sometimes a few parts are left unresolved, this is probably what feels off about it. On the whole I really enjoyed it though.

Musacbaxx: Pretty neat little track though it doesn't stand out too much.

No_: The guitar (I think?) was a bit loud in the mix but either way this would have to be my favourite track the choir and the bass really do it for me.
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