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Old May 15 2008, 2:23 PM

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Hi , I hope you will enjoy my piece ! I found a motif and developped it, tell me what do you think
Positive and negative feedback is welcome! thanks in advance.
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Old May 15 2008, 3:04 PM

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i enjoyed it. it has a nice baroqian feel to it. I think the motive variations are neat and it develops pleasantly.

Last edited by gijs van beusekom : May 15 2008 at 3:11 PM. Reason: Seen other post of yours.
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Old May 17 2008, 7:36 AM

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Thanks !
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Old May 21 2008, 5:39 AM

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The individual voices are OK, but the counterpoint is full of basic mistakes. Can you hear where it sounds wrong?
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Old May 21 2008, 1:29 PM

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You could have done so much more on the guitar with it. It's a pity though. But great! Expand it more! 2 voice perhaps? A bass line? I am to play your piece soon! :-D
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Old May 28 2008, 12:59 PM

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Whats wrong with the counterpoint ? :S
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