My Birthday Song

This song (Originaly composed for my twin brothers) I decide to put on the web for the next person that I found out had a birthday. JOHANNHOWITZER is the one and anyone else that feels so inclined to listen in, please do. The quality aint' so great but quality dont matter, birthdays do. Happy Birthday!!

Please Comment

Pretty good arrangement. Did your brother like it? It has a festive feel to it.

I liked the little pause at the end before the final pizz!

M

I love it XD It's so cute! I love how you can totally hear happy birthday, but not... Now you just needed to find the instruments to play it ;D

Nice job though, it's very short and sweet.

- Leon

Thanks for the comments!!

In Answer To Montpellier: Yes my "Brothers" liked it (twins remember)

And to Leon: I dont mind short....just as long as its sweet

Thanks again

I like your way of using the instr. The bass comes in very nicely fit perfectly and plasys itäs role to 100%. And I do like the feeling you give it, it's happy maybe naivly happy. Like some american x-mas thing. Sounds like some Ad jingle

I'd still prefer a Canadian Christ-mas thing but that would be my take on it.

Thanks for the comments!!

it was quite nice to hear this tune without vocals.
kinda strange to hear it when it's no one that i know who's birthday it is, but i enjoyed it. it made me happy. so you've done well to sustain the original feel.

I personally thought you should have added a pretty sweet drum beat in there somewhere, for giggles. hehe. I loved it BTW.