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The January one was pretty good. Nice baroque style. The only thing that stood out for me was that fermata in the middle.
The February one:
The second violin needs a more interesting harmony to complement the melody. I saw in a couple places that it was playing the same thing as the first violin. The other thing that bugged me was when there were those long notes being held for a couple of measures. You needed some dynamics in there. Work on that.
March: Reminds me of the first one. Very nice, theres that fermata again though.
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Jan 28 2006, 7:15 AM
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