my piano compositions

hi im new here and im really interested in improving my piano composing
ive written 2 short piano compositions. hope you enjoy
i would like comments on both of them

I am going to bookmark this thread...because I want to help you, but at the moment...it is 10:49 PM and im hardly in the analytical mood

Haha, check back in like...2 days and you will have a full blown essay from me

Welcome to YC as well and hopefully you will enjoy yourself.

You were trying for a sort of variation on Pachabells canon on the second one (the "b"ish section). It was a rather nice small section.

thanx guys =)
lol yeah i know that it sounds like pachabels canon
the fact is i didnt know that until my piano teacher and a friend pointed out that. other than that, i came up with this without out ever thinking of the canon
and for the The Tear piece, i uh...kinda stuff the middle bit a bit, where it changes to major, it sux XD but i havent bothered to make any changes or record it yet so far =\

i have a few other half done pieces but my net is pretty bad at the moment so it takes too long to upload them. ill find another time to upload them.

ive just uploaded another piece in pdf formate ive recently written
not polished or complete but i would like people to see if its ok or not =). i wrote it in lilypond program. its quite confusing that program...

ive written a small part of another piece now

...sorry i havent reviewed yet. See, i seem to have a bad habbit of saying ill do things...but I never do. I promise...I will review your pieces, im just working a lot.

lol ok ill just wait patiently