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Old Aug 16 2006, 8:24 PM

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I woke up in the middle of the night a couple months ago and scrached out most of what I've got here. Since then I have adjusted some things and polished some parts up a little. I'm having trouble with what to put in after the repeat though. I want a completely differant feel, something more rythmic, but I cant think of anything. If someone could help me out I'd really apreciate it. Any feedback on what I have already is welcome too.
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Old Aug 16 2006, 10:40 PM

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I don't think the piece needs to continue and you need to think up more to put in it. I think it is nice as it is and you should come up with a spectacular ending. I like how it sounds, catchy...
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Old Aug 16 2006, 10:49 PM

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Thank you. I had it end at the end of the first repeat before, then I added the second. I could end it there, I have thought about that, but if I can keep it going I want to.
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