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Old Nov 26 2006, 12:33 AM

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Funky Gonzales

Hey guys I just finished this song tonight. well.. it's mostly finished. I'm not sure about the last 15 bars or so. Anyway please let me know what you think & which bits you like!

Also if you could think of a name that'd be great... I was thinking "Funky Gonzales"
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Old Nov 26 2006, 9:26 AM

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haha, cool! seems to have alot of latin influence to me, especially with the rhythm and piano part up to 1:00ish and also the last 30 secs too (also these were my fave parts).

Doesn't however seem particularly jazzy to me. maybe this is due to lack of knowledge/the midi quality but still a good tune nonetheless.

I think it might work nicer with quite a definite finish too, just a short sharp burst of chord I. This is just my opinion tho and obviously everyone composes differently!

And that title would definately fit! XD
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Old Nov 30 2006, 8:09 PM

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Thanks Anybody have any ideas for the ending? I'm definitely going to change it.
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Old Nov 30 2006, 11:32 PM

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As you want, but I personnaly enjoyed the ending as much as the whole piece!
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Old Apr 29 2007, 11:57 AM

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Hey I came up with a new ending a while ago but forgot to post it! Been so busy with exams & all...

I personally think it's a big improvement on the slightly disappointing ending I had originally (see the first post).
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