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Old May 31 2008, 6:03 PM

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New Prelude

Here is the start of a new prelude that I am working on. Let me know what you think. I know the score is messy, I will fix it later.

-Chris

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http://chrisjohnsonsspace.com/PreludeinEminorbeg.mp3

pdf:
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Old May 31 2008, 6:18 PM

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Chris,

This is very well done! You understand the Piano very well. Keep it going! The one thing I worry about is the 3-on-4 in measure 10. That could get hairy, but then again, so could the rest of the piece!

Keep it going!
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Old Jun 2 2008, 2:58 AM

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Thanks for the Words of Encouragement? anyone else have any tips/ideas/suggestions?
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This sounds very good to me. In the opening bars the left hand kinda drowns out the right hand though. Also, in bar 17, is the left hand playable?

Bar 19 sounds sweet
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Old Jun 3 2008, 4:47 PM

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I know the left hand drowns out the right in the beginning. Thats why I tried to put dynamics in the music, but the mp3 doesn't listen to me. Also, the mp3 plays measure 17 a little two fast for me. It is very rubato, so yes, it is playable.
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