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Old Feb 2 2006, 10:03 PM

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Hey here is a another STRING QUARTET song that I recently finished, comments are cool
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Old Feb 4 2006, 9:31 PM

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Hey there!

It was funny, this piece started playing and it immediately reminded me of a theme from one of the Disney movies, can't recall which though at the moment.

On to the piece itself, you've got some interesting ideas here and you use the ensemble well. Rhythm variation between the instruments is done very well. On the flipside, I didn't like the piece very much because of the harmonies. Technically, it's done very well but harmonically you really didn't impress me so much. It seems directionless and even dissonant at times because of this, which is a pity because in all other respects it's a very good piece. I enjoyed it overall, it just could have been better in my opinion.

Keep up the good work!
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Old Feb 4 2006, 9:40 PM

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Yah the piece kind of does get weird, but I can't think if the Disney song, lol

I tried to make a good melody, and give the viola/cello part a good part but it was hard because the violin sounded good lol, in other pieces the cello and viola or harmonies have better parts (made for them)
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