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Old Nov 29 2007, 8:40 PM

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Night

This is a piece I've done here in the last couple of days, it uses a piano, 2 violins and a cello.

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Old Nov 29 2007, 8:47 PM

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I really like your melody. You should deffinetly make it longer and develop it more. You have such a great thing going, don't stop just yet. I did remind me of night. What came to my head was walking in London w/ a full moon out. And I don't even live in London. Anyway, I hope this helps. Keep up the good work.


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Old Dec 4 2007, 1:24 AM

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Thanks for your reply, I'm thinking about making it longer.


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Old Dec 9 2007, 5:02 PM
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Oh, I'm impressed! The music is so poetic, so beautiful! Your certainly shouldn't stop at this and need to bring some development in the whole piece. Try to improve it a little! And - I say it again - a very good work, you definitely have a talant for composing! Keep up!
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