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Old Jun 20 2006, 2:13 PM

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Well, its a something for my good friend's custom video game. Most likely a World Map through the first have. Or a town, or, something.

Now, here are my questions:

1. Is it really mine, or did I steal a part of it subconciously.

2. What could use improvement.

3. Does it fit the travelling world mappish kinda feel at all?
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Old Jun 20 2006, 2:22 PM

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Well, its a something for my good friend's custom video game. Most likely a World Map through the first have. Or a town, or, something.

Now, here are my questions:

1. Is it really mine, or did I steal a part of it subconciously.

2. What could use improvement.

3. Does it fit the travelling world mappish kinda feel at all?
Now that you mention it, you remind me that I don't compose; I steal unconsciously lol
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Old Jun 20 2006, 2:26 PM

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Hey friend! I thought it sounded just fine, i think it would fit well for an RPG. is it RPG?
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Old Jun 20 2006, 2:39 PM

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Haha, ya. Maybe I should of stated that.


Its so basic though... nothing I could find in it stood out to make it any more than the average cheap RPG game (which I guess it is, but still.)
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Old Jun 20 2006, 2:45 PM

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Hey, who cares if its basic, I means its a good start. Besides music is music.. no matter how horrible it is, its still music right? (Maybe not but oh well.. lol). If you really want to improve on it, my suggestion would be to take out some of those bass drums at the beginning, it sounds a little bit.. how should i put it.. uh.. too much? if you will. (its just what i think )
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Old Jun 20 2006, 2:56 PM

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Ya, not a bad idea. I'll wait for one or two more suggestions though, before I post an updated one.
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