Oasis Sunrise

Hey my second piece on here. any comments are welcome.
you can read the video description on video
YouTube - Oasis Sunrise

Hey this one wasn't too bad, it caught my attention more than the Water one. I didn't understand the Water, there was no flow of direction that one, sounded kind of random.

This Oasis song was much more nicely arranged, you had the melody that was interesting enough t listen too. There is more you can do with your arrangements. Try to avoid the splattering of notes on your program, try to hear the song in your head before you even right it, sing it in, and punch it in.

thanks for the advise. and the water one. ha. i just experimenting. but i like it. it has nothing to do with the title. i just needed something to name it.
thanks again