one of my composition/ 'Rainbow'

Composed this recently/ sound quality not so good, had some problems with file transfer form my digital piano to PC.
this piece has to do with light, hope, sunshine and dreams which come true
Enjoy!

I quite enjoyed this peice. I feel that you successfully portrayed those items mentioned.
Good Job.

One bit of criticizing: the transition into the slow section (around 1:50) seemed a little awkward, but other than that i liked it.

I liked the syncopation and the end was really pretty. It did sound like happy rainbows! There were some parts that reminded me of the film score to "the piano," but that's not neccesarily a bad thing. The strings or voices (can never tell with midi) were a nice touch. The build up was nice. Very pretty. I liked it even better the second time around.

What's with the strings? This should be in the Chamber board...

I have a suggestion that you can experiment with. If you're going to repeat rhythms and harmonies and want to keep those same basic key centers, why not experiment with "non chord tones" or extensions or whatever you might want to call them to change the color and build tension through the repetitions. Otherwise, just copy/pasting in Finale isn't going to create much aural interest...

Very pretty piece, needs a singer.

Originally Posted by Dead Chicken

I quite enjoyed this peice. I feel that you successfully portrayed those items mentioned.

i before e except after c..........