Onira Glyka

HE! HE!!

the technique helped a lot. Althou the best part is missing becouse i couldn't remeber it. i just start playing and i forgot to stop.

this Composition is still incompleat but i want your opinion!!!

i posted a piano version too!! it sounds differend!!

inspiration!!! wrote moree!!! i like it !!! you???

hey!! i just finished some more and will really like your opinion on it. any kind of critisism accepted!!! just say what do you thing.

A little too simple for my tastes, although the melody was rather pretty.

I like music that varies in dynamics and moods. This one bored me to tears in some spots. The instrumentation isn't amazing...but yet it still has some odd enjoyability to it.

Good work, I suppose,

Nico

Wow I wasn't expecting that.

Everything seems to be in place, but I think you should add other instruments, unless you want this piece to be a solo, then cut into the middle and add some vivace(basically I'm meaning something different with a little more life, return back to the main idea then go into the actual vivace part.

Have a profound day.

Funny, sounds a lot like Respighi...

thanks chad, i wil try that.

cheers

here it is in a latest form. i think this is the final. what do you thinkl?

now it seems much more cohesive and well structured. congrats, it's a fine piece!

thanks Frantz!!

every miniute i add somthing. i got crazy with this thing!!! do you like this one?? i know started doing this for tow pianos and maybe later add some voice in there. check it out.

Well here are some features I liked.

I liked the arpeggiating left hand throughout. I also liked how the last 30 seconds or so got more upbeat. That is cool but maybe that should be earlier two like somewhere in the B section.

From what I could tell the form was ABAC is this correct? Umm I liked the way it sounded kind of an upbeat minor mode. IMy favorite part was the meter changes, but it was great I enjoyed listening to it!

new one