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Old Oct 26 2007, 12:48 PM

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Smile Pachelbel Canon for Flutes

Tell me what you think. Thanks.

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Old Mar 22 2008, 9:58 PM

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Can you tell me any suggestions please so I can revise it? Thanks
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Old Mar 23 2008, 10:21 PM

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I think you're missing some parts
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Old Mar 23 2008, 10:23 PM

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Like what kind of parts?

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Old Mar 24 2008, 6:14 PM

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eg. after the first four measures, theres a part that you didn't include.
you put it in there for the clarinet arrangement though
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Old Mar 24 2008, 6:16 PM

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Thanks

I thought so, but I wasn't thinking at that time. Thanks for pointing that out. Did you like the clarinet one though?
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Old Mar 25 2008, 3:46 PM

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Flutes can only play one note at a time
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Old Mar 25 2008, 6:09 PM

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Why are you arranging this canon for three (four needed actually for your score) flutes instead of say for flute, oboe, clarinet and bassoon? With different instruments more tonal colouring is possible, the parts are more distinct and there is a broader range of pitches available.

Also the Finale score is bare - no dynamics, no phrasing, no tempo changes - which makes the sound mechanical and less interesting to listen to.

There are many many arrangements of this famous piece so the listener has fairly high expectations.
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Old Mar 26 2008, 10:10 PM

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It is a split part for the flutes. Not two notes at once. lol

Thanks for the suggestions. Keep them coming please.
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Old Mar 29 2008, 3:22 PM

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Both Mark and Euler have pointed out some very good things.

It is a very famous piece, so the expectations ARE pretty high - just like Euler stated.

What I find rather annoying is the potential you could put into this arrangement. Why three flutes? I mean you can have a large woodwind ensemble instead, in order to have the timbral mixture!

You have to pay attention to the fact that woodwinds require air to perform a tone - there are several passages are slightly too long. I am not a flautist so I do not really know, but 21 measures without a pause is pretty much.
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