Piano concerto. d-minor, continuation

Here the actual continuation of the first movement, piano and orchestra:

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Peter

Hey Peter,

This is great. The mood of the opening orcestra realy got to me. Very thoughtfull in mood. The piano entry is accordingly and little orcestral touches are nice.
I felt the you could use the orcestra a little more as the piano developt the idea. I think that when you write for different voices the continuitation of the voice should never be lost. I should almost be as two or more peices in one. I felt like the orcestra part sort of lost it's continuitatie after not being heard for a while. Also, the second subject is not very contrasting. Although you combine the two subjects great, the structure isn't realy obvious. For me although, that is. The flow of the piece gets a bit to static after a while. Lastly the piece ends a bit abruptly in my opinion.
These comments must all be read with a background of admirability. I think you set a great mood and made a nice piece of classical music.

Thanks gijs van beusekom,
I want to add more orchestral background to the actuall solo piano parts, so that there is more smoother orchestral sound backing the piano, the end isnt actually a real end of the piece, I didn have time to write good coda part now, but I plan to continue with some variations or at least a coda. I want also add some more instruments to get fuller sound and harmony at some places. In this version there are no expression marks until now, I do it at the very end and hope that cres. decres. and forte-piano changes will make it more dynamic.

Very musical, I would very much like to hear more.

I 'd also like to here more of the orchestra.Still good.