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Old Mar 17 2008, 11:50 PM

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Piano Sonata G Major Allegro Assai

Final Movment of the piano sonata.

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Piano Sonata G Major allegro assai 3.mid
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I Allegro G Major
II Andante C Major
III Allegro Assai A Major

Hope you like them

I have finished the score, I used more time to actualy fix the score then i used to write the music, but is not so bad now

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Old Mar 18 2008, 6:41 PM

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as first posting here...i want to congratulate with you again for the good work you've done, the big efforts, the time and ideas you spent to create such a nice piece.
and the last movement got a very wonderful flavour and it is just nice...well written, every idea follows the other naturally and it is no redundant or boring, which is a great thing.
maybe the first movement should be reworked a bit...creating a little more structurate piece with the light of the new step you got in you last movement of this sonata. but other than that, i have nothing else to add but:

C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S !

-Guglielmo
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Old Mar 22 2008, 6:30 PM

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Thanks glad you liked it
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Old Mar 22 2008, 9:33 PM

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How could I not like it? ya gotta like a good piano sonata
It was cheerful, bright and exciting. You've done well.

Lex
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Old Mar 22 2008, 9:47 PM

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Thanks Mr Lex
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Old Mar 23 2008, 6:54 AM

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Hmmm. It's got some great ideas - the development and structure sounds convincing, and the shape of all the phrases are highly idiomatic (if you're going for pastiche Mozart). The main thing that lets it down is your use of harmony. Sometimes there are crucial notes missing from triads, you occassionally choose chords that are inappropriate, and the two part passages have lots of fourths, fifths and unprepared seconds - all of these make the piece sound slightly off in places. Having said that, the melodies and overall flow of the piece are exactly right. I suspect you're just struggling to wrestle down all the chords you're hearing in your head. Playing lots of Mozart (and doing more compositions like this) will help drastically.

Also. . . . isn't it in A major?
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Old Mar 23 2008, 9:44 AM

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Thank you for a detaild reply Zetetic. hehe the A major yes, I had planed the movements key sig like this, the sonata is in G major, So first movement is in Tonic.
Second is in C major , (subdominant) Third should be in dominant (d major) but i like A Major better so its in the dominants dominant.
1. G major (Tonic)
2. C major (subdom.)
3. A major (dom.dom)

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