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Old Feb 11 2008, 12:18 AM

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Dude I am downloading this to my ipod. I agree that you can make this song better by giving it an intro. Other than that I can't really pick out any "flaws"
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Old Feb 11 2008, 7:08 AM

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Hey Mike,

This is really really nice, as expected. No criticisms I think the whole thing is very well conceived and well written, but maybe a little suggestion - if you ever thought about making it longer, how about the inclusion of a slightly darker section of some kind, which you could obviously then develop etc etc just as something to compliment the more 'pretty' material you already have...
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Old Feb 11 2008, 9:01 AM

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Thank you all for kindly commenting.

Matt: I don't presently plan to expand the piece, but I will bear that suggestion in mind if I ever do get around to doing that. I'm actually in the process of adding a few revisions to my Concerto For Ten Instruments, which was completed in May 2007, just to give you an idea as to the speed I tend to work.
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Old Feb 11 2008, 10:48 AM

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I'm actually in the process of adding a few revisions to my Concerto For Ten Instruments, which was completed in May 2007, just to give you an idea as to the speed I tend to work.
Will you be posting after these revisions? And do they involve the other movements?

*heads off to listen to CfTI again*
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Old Feb 11 2008, 11:48 AM

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Will you be posting after these revisions? And do they involve the other movements?
Most likely I will post them, and yes, at least one other movement should be involved, but don't hold your breath.

I've always worked slowly where composition is concerned, and nowadays my inclination to compose at all is very minimal. But, I try to get bits and pieces down when inspiration strikes.
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