Managed to figure that out afterwards. Love the beginning, and the progression in the first few bars. Harmonics are great, just getting them to play is another thing ... I'm such an amateur!
The middle section, where you've placed the tenor clef, I don't think it's necessary actually. You're not going extremely high and the phrase pattern is repeated so I'd suggest just keeping it to the bass. I was a bit confused about the crosses (+). I take it they mean stopped tones. This B section can get a bit boring but it does have potential and character. Maybe a new chord sequence could move it somewhere else, or just add dynamics.
In Bar 9, how about making some sort of chordal sequence, just to bring the piece to some sort of finale? As I was playing through, I always found I had a weird gap between pizzing the last note of Bar 9 and going to play the harmonic in the next bar. It was just having to stop strings from vibrating to get to the harmonic - maybe you could use something else.
I think the D.C. is fine.
