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Old Jan 8 2008, 4:27 PM

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Good piece, catchy, as said before. the middle section is too repetitive, you could cut a repitition or two. The glissando's are fine in the beginning and the end(as you recapulate the beginning near the end) but at about 1:40 they sound, well, obnoxious.

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Old Jan 8 2008, 9:43 PM

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Thanks for the feedback everyone!

Paginani - I'll try cutting out part of the middle section and see how it is without the glissandos.
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