A bit hard to comment on it detailed without a score, but I can say I liked it very much

. The ending could be better, though. I'm not sure if I can describe it accurately, but I felt that it could've been developed for just a little bit longer and it'd be perfect

. Well, better than it is now, at least

. Overall, the piece felt like a very well put together prelude. It certainly matches it's title well, I thought.
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