Prelude & Fugue G Minor Baroque

This is a lillte messy but hope you like it

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I liked it, you kept the feeling throughout, and don't worry it doesn't get to messy.

...but I really dislike the ending. It's too sudden and it doesn't fit in with the rest of the piece.

Originally Posted by Paginani

I liked it, you kept the feeling throughout

He kept the feeling alright.

Originally Posted by Paginani

but I really dislike the ending. It's too sudden and it doesn't fit in with the rest of the piece.

nothing in this piece fits in with the rest.

I hear WAYYYYYY too many octaves and fifths and hollow noises.. there's not enough consonance. it's not really that good, it's extremely messy... try maybe a different genre. romantic? 12 tone? hahahaa that's the greatest answer ever to all fugues! the odd harmony actually sounds modern at about :06.. pretty cool sound. also you stay in the tonic way too long and don't give a sense of any tonality (chord progressions) whatsoever. so it's basically like a bunch of pointless notes stuck random places that never cease to appear. STUDY REAL MUSIC! there's a cool part at about 3/4 of the way through.. you put in these little traditional progressions. judging by this, I can tell you're a great composer (seriously), you just need to study actual music and knowledge of the past if you ever want to write a real prelude and fugue. thank you and good night. *bows*

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wow... something told me you were very good.. still, you use too much of the tonic.. the harmonies don't suprise me.. how do you record? hmm.. i think i figured it out, it sounds as if you are trying to artificially balance the music somehow.. it sounds very symmetrical to me for some reason... by this I'm not exactly sure what I mean but it sounds like you're trying to do something more than just simply sonata form. what is it?

i went back and listened again and it sounds like you repeat a lot of phrases twice which is nice sometimes, but you should probably look into using more complex motion.

there's something unique in your style though, I like it.

very fine piece! loved! your voicing is original and charming. the way you introduced chords and which chords you choose were very ingenious and effective. keep up!

Thank you for reply