Prelude in g

This is a little prelude I wrote perhaps for a scary movie . I just felt inspired and wrote it down. I recall darkness and a very murky mood when I wrote it though with a lots excitement. It's in g and it took me about 2 to 3 days to write the melody. The accompaniment took me about a week or so. I had some difficulties with the last measure of the climax. I had two musical options and choose this one. Also to write the accompaniment was a difficult task since it was my first time harmonizing a complete melody. ( I wrote the whole melody and a different string accompaniment in 3 days, but later I decided to use a piano one instead)
I also respected the rules in classical writing.
I must say these is a hard piece for any amateur cellist (just assuming) because of some of the fast high notes. Any comments(long or short) are appreciated.
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I don't quite get a haunting feel from this, only a kind of "sophisitcated" eerie sound. I'm sure a real human could get a better sound, though.

Anyway, I like the melody and the piano accompanyment. I typically write the melody and accompanyment at the same time, or at least before I leave a section.

I don't quite get a haunting feel from this, only a kind of "sophisitcated" eerie sound. I'm sure a real human could get a better sound, though.

I typically write the melody and accompanyment at the same time, or at least before I leave a section.

First I would like to say that I appreciate the fact that you always make comments on my pieces. Thank you!
I do too... though this time I didn't have many options.

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It's really nice, i imported it into a midi to mp3 converter and the mp3 version sounds MUCHO eerier and haunting.
I like it, Nice job.

Thanks CK, Meta.
Meta would you mind posting your mp3. I am very curious to hear how it sounds like.
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Nice melody I like it a lot...
you are very talented though your piano accompaniment could be a bit better.

very interesting and effective piece! the melody and harmony are very nice!

thank you...Frantz It is actually one of my favorite pieces...