The Quick Mind

A small piece. broken chords, almost a solo suggesting multiple voices.
I'm satisfied with the first part, second part needs some work still. (but for now its driving me crazy)
Nothing as complex as something simple

Artisimo

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"Nothing as complex as something simple"

great observation Artisimo!

your piece is very intersting. it has a subtle way of shifting the direction of the flow, with delightful melody and fine bassline, very cool. but i agree that the second section could be bettered - go ahead! i think that all runs fine till 0:43, then you conclude with a perfectly logical solution, but, pity - a very uncomitted and neglectable one too..... as if you was in a hurry to finish the piece and put the first thing which occurred to you, but this ending is unworthy i will await for the happy end
cheeeeeeeeers!

Hmmm. Interesting. I like. =D

With the second part, you should try drifting away from the same rhythmic pattern somehow. It's okay, but it could use more variation: specifically rhythmically. But, otherwise, it's good.

Good job. =D