Quintet "the noise"

It is about 2 in the morning and my older brother brought two chicks to" my apartment "( it really isn't )
and they were giggling and making noise. At that time we lived in a small apartment and every thing could be heard. So I woke up upset ( I was having a good dream) and left the apartment with pen and paper at hand. My mom, who was sleeping in the same room as I, noticed it and started yelling , so first my brother got upset cuz he didn't want his chicks to know he was still living with his mom.(by the way, he is 31) So, I was on the steps composing and suddenly my brother half naked shows up and start yelling at me. Then my mom comes and does the same. So how unjust, I was sleeping , they make noise and even yell at me. I wrote this piece describing this whole story. Better if you have finale note pad. I wrote the story underneath the notes just like " in a hurry to get to school". Well , there it is.
I threw away the original manuscript, but saved it on finale. I say this because I don't quiet remember who is who in this music. so far I know the 2 violins are the chicks, my mon is the timpani, my brother the flute, and me the cello. That is actually right. If not, figure it out
Techniches I used.
1. through composed, wrote each line as a character
2. I took me about an hour
3. Rapsody, free writing no specific form, though at times is sounds like a cappricio
4. It was 2 in the mornig I couldn't scream ," I GOT IT"

Quite an interesting piece. It didn't remind me much of the story; I would have thought it would be chippier, like giggling, then angry when everyone starts waking up. But it's still a nice overall.