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Old Apr 10 2008, 4:53 PM

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I say that it needs more bass in the mix to really get the bitches to rub their ass against me semi-rhythmically.

Otherwise, it's almost there.
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Old Apr 10 2008, 10:22 PM

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The Force is strong with this piece.
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Old Apr 18 2008, 5:10 PM

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Heavy groove, sexy vocals, interesting mix of genres. I could really hear this tune on the radio someday. (And that's not a bad thing)

Only thing missing is the lack of a prominent bass.
Other than that it's awesome, good work.
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Old Apr 22 2008, 5:44 PM

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I could image myself listen to this in my leisure time. It has a dark tonal quality compared other reggaeton, but over all awesome.
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Old May 4 2008, 6:55 AM

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This sounds just like Daddy Yankee, right down to the specific drum sounds.

For anyone who has not heard any Daddy Yankee, if you listen to his track called "Gasolina", that's pretty much what I'm basing this on. This track and that track could be next to each other on the same album and I'd think they were written by the same person.

So, clearly I'm suspicious of the authorship of this track, but if you really did create it then I'm very impressed because it's brilliant.
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Old May 5 2008, 10:01 AM

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YouTube - GASOLINA - Daddy Yankee

Same sample?
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Old May 6 2008, 11:20 AM

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I suppose so. I should really have listened to more reggaeton before posting that, because it seems that a LOT of reggaeton music sounds almost exactly the same.

It's still a great track though, as evidenced by the fact that I can't distinguish it from commercial stuff.
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Old May 8 2008, 12:20 AM

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I just thought I'd follow up on my comments on the mix. While they still stand as what I personally feel, the mix choices you've made are actually consistent with the (admittedly few) other Reggaeton songs I've heard since. I guess that, from my perspective, the whole genre is mixed wrong!
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Old May 9 2008, 8:35 AM

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Nice.

That's pretty much all I can say.
I think it should have more a baseline, but hey, I'm only 17 and I listen to WAY too much Steely Dan & Sade.
But yeah, that was awesome. Awesome groove (I don't think I've ever given that compliment), it's mixed really well. And while I'm not a big fan of that genre in particular, I'm liking it more and more.

Nice vocals, too. I wish I could sing...
Columbian rebels....that's a pretty interesting background story....

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Old May 14 2008, 3:09 AM

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Hey, this piece is awesome!

My brother introduced me to Reggaeton after he went ot Spain and I have to say its a lot better then the majority of the drivel he listens to.

I thik the piece is well mixed but perhps with a better trumpet synth could sound more polished. The beats are instantly catchy and the lyrics sound professional.

Chris
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