I have now listened to both of your movements
Mvt 1: I loved the crunch, it came a bit unsuspectedly. I do agree with Daniel, it needs a bit more work to get it slightly more coherent. Maybe it is just be, but I felt that the piece needs a small slightly more tonal part just to shaken up the ear. I felt that after awhile my ear became indifferent to the music, but my mind whilst reading it did not. I liked the part that begins at measure 35 - The lovely entrance you give the second trumpet
I may be wrong since no one else has pointed this out, but on measure 41 the Horn I is playing a C5. And since I see no accidentals on both the Horns and the Trumpets my conclusions is that this is in concert pitch. [Looking at the .midi, cannot open the .pdf] Maybe I am terribly wrong, I am sorry if it is so. Another thing to comment on is the fact that the first movement is not a quintet but a sextet. I see 6 staffs, two horns. I thought first that it was an aid for your writing but when I looked closer I noticed that they played simultaneously.
Mvt II: I found this the best out of the two. A great contrast to the first one, as Daniel mentioned earlier. I simply love the rhythm you created. The themes are divine, reminds me of a piece from a game, cannot recall what it is called. As in the first movement there are some notes that are a bit too high on the horn, but they are just minor details.
Thank you for sharing, very lovely pieces
