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I like this. Ripples and Reflection...works nicely.
One thing I might suggest is the idea of "reflection". Maybe try mirroring the melody. Assuming you havn't already, I may have missed it! The left hand gets a tad repetitive at times - 1:38 for example. Make sure you think about each and every note, and don't be afraid to use more chords, alot of the time the left hand is one note and it feels empty in places.
Very nice effort though, welcome to the forums!
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