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Old Apr 8 2007, 9:55 AM

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Cool Siete

This originally started out as a percussion ensemble piece (hence the xylophone), but when I added sax to the melody...
It shouldn't take a genious to figure out why I named the piece Siete, besides the fact that it's a Latin piece. I'm not to sure about the 4/4 section and the vibe solo- I'm think I'm gonna have to take that out. Any suggestions? Comments? Likey? No likey?

It wouldn't save properly as a midi, so if anyone has Finale and wants to convert this for me, thanks!

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Old Apr 12 2007, 6:49 PM

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Pretty nice piece, but it kinda feels unbalanced - I think the vibe solo is alright, but the brief 4/4 section made the transition feel kinda abrupt. It'd be nice that part were longer, as I was kind of tired of the ostinato rhymthic patterns by then - maybe switch the 3/8 + 4/8 patterns into 4/8 + 3/8 here and there to spice things up throughout the piece. Also, I rather liked the section at ms. 109, but again the brevity of it really made it a tease . I think more of these deviations throughout the piece would make it a lot more interesting and engaging.
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