simple dance...

Was going through some old ideas I had sequenced and found this one. Thought I might clean it up and turn it into a midi. It is pretty darn short - just over 1 minute... but if I expanded it I get the feeling it might get boring. I don't know exactly what style it is - it was kind of improvised. If anything, I think it could do with more ornamentation in the melody (crush notes, trills, etc.). Positive and negative feedback all welcome...

nice piece. it has an appealing rhythm, although the left hand might show more variation, but still is effective. the melody i also good and the overall effect is charmig. regards!

I like it.... it can definitely made more interesting as a standalone piece, though.

First iteration of the sequence... to me sounds like there is something missing, maybe a melody line. Maybe at 00:21 you can repeat that whole section again, but this second time add a line on top of it, what you have at the beginning sounds to me like an introductory accompaniment line which should be built on later.

Right now, the slower interlude at 00:21 seems a little abrupt. Maybe you could ease into a little more carefully.

Something else I felt, if you slowed this down a lot and made it ten times longer, and built more on the slow bit at 00:21, you would have yourself a decent minimalism piece. I say try for it, see what you come up with.

The sequence is very nice, the chord progression.... but I feel you could just have a more 'tangible' melody line, right now it sounds more like a rhythmic accompaniment to something else that is missing.

Melikes.

I like the sound of it.
The interplay of harmony and rhythm kind of makes it feel both happy and sad/desolate.

I like the piece too! Though it's short, it has some interesting, quite original ideas. And, in fact, it is not simple. Very well done!

this one is very good !!!!
at 00:41 it plays a nice tone
I really like it