Sing and Joy, for the Messiah cometh

Is this an arrangement of a hymn that has already been written? The accompaniment is too overpowering, and the melody doesn't come through enough. There is this random string sound that is extremely high near the middle, and it's really out of place. Also, the ending is too un-final. It's an original way to end, yes, but not really appropriate for what you are trying to do.

Is this an arrangement of a hymn that has already been written? The accompaniment is too overpowering, and the melody doesn't come through enough. There is this random string sound that is extremely high near the middle, and it's really out of place. Also, the ending is too un-final. It's an original way to end, yes, but not really appropriate for what you are trying to do.

1. thanks for giving yourself the trouble of commenting a piece from an author you obviously do not like.

2. yes, i have used an existing hymn.

3. i am sorry for have not followed your own standards. that is tragic!!!!

4. you show a biased understanding of what should and what shouldn't be done in music.

5. i am not here to learn anything, for that already proved to be hopeless. i still share my pieces hoping that somebody - maybe 2 or 3 individuals - could enjoy, just that. if not, pity, but i won't change a single note. i only post pieces i consider finished.

6. how can you know what i am trying to do? i did exactly what i wished, nothing more, nothing less.

7. despite your 3 comments, all negative, on my pieces, i wonder why you still spend your time listening to my compositions, and not only that, but also commenting! i can only suppose that you like them in an obscure and unconfessed way. so, thanks !