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Old Feb 19 2008, 3:27 AM

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Sketch EP

Hello, Im new here, as you see.. But anyway.. I composed an EP and I want to hear some comments on it.. Sansan
Thank you..
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Old Feb 23 2008, 4:50 PM

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For starters, you should consider putting your music on a site that will allow streaming; ACIDplanet, archive.org, etc. You'll get more reviews that way, by minimizing the effort required to listen to the music.

Intro: Fantastic vibe here. Great sounds. Nice, subtle development. However, just a little on the slow side. I wouldn't call it boring, but it's dangerously close.

Leaking Ear: Lots of interesting layering going on here. Again, great sounds. However, I feel like the piece drags on far too long with not enough development. Though there's a lot of stuff happening, the music doesn't ever venture far from its starting point until the very end; it has a rather static feel to it.

Bug Tea: This one avoids the static feel of Leaking Ear completely; it has a strong sense of development.

Vinyl Fireworks: This is a cool piece. Probably my favorite.

Ralf: I felt like this track would have been better if you had returned to the opening material before the end; it would have given it a better sense of wholeness. As it is, it just feels like two tracks stuck together.
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Old Feb 24 2008, 7:03 AM

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Hey,thanks for the comment.. Im working on a new project and I need some critics..

For the next time, I think I'll have to make a sample for the listeners, since the piece Im making is a large one.. And Ill have to think more about where and how to put it..

Now.. For the Intro.. Its just funny, that it was quite faster in most points of the making..

Leaking Ear.. I wanted to to push myself to do a longer track and with a ostinato on it.. Just to see how it all comes out..

BugTea.. The first one to be made..

Vinyl Fireworks.. Didnt think it could be a favorited track..

And finaly.. Ralf.. It's an experiment.. Actually, all the part after the noise is a one track played normally and the same track but two times faster, played repeatedly, at the same time..

So, thats just something I wanted to say about the tracks..
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