A Small String Quartet Piece

Hello, This my first time posting anything here...
I've only been listening and read through ur forum til now...
I began composing when i first saw Amadeus which made me like classical music almost 7 years ago. I wanna give u guys a piece i wrote last nite.....a string quartet....It's nicknamed "Staccato"

Here u go:

Hey. Welcome aboard!

Been listening through. Chord progression is good for a first time and ranges (I think) are in order, so firstly well done! Just opinion now: the piece does get a bit boring at first with the staccato, though maybe that's the crappy midi file. Any chance you uploading a Finale file or something like that?

There's some good ideas in there. Liked the way the opening idea was brought back again in the middle of the piece, slightly developed. If you could get that into Finale, add some dynamics and stuff, I think you'll have a good composition in hand.

Thank you for your opinion and im very happy that i got a reply..hehe i'll c wut i can do to make "staccato" better...thanks again.

I dun have Finale or Sibelius, only sumtin called Musicator which i bought long time ago...i think Musicator is very easy for composing...

I agree that MIDI sounds alil "stupid". i do have a MP3 of it though, but been havin problems attaching it

nice!!!! very enjoyable! intersting and clear harmony and good handling of voices.

Makes me very happy to hear that u like my music....thanks!

Hello again,

You can download the MP3 version here!....sounds much better!
http://www.geocities.com/platinumid2...ato_Cminor.mp3

Ah. How old are you?

That was fatefully immature, but I must say your counterpoint is good. Your ideas are not developed enough...but I take it you're a beginner so I'll go easy on ya ^_^.